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Craving a Sin. by ~MakoUzumaki2461:iconMakoUzumaki2461:

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One thing leads to another--
I got this craving,
for a certain something--
a certain...
sin.
Like Greed,
where it just needs more and more.
Like Gluttony,
it just can't be satisfied.
Like Pride--
it has to be bottled up.
Like Lust,
only it's a silent yearning.
Like Envy,
how it can't open up like she can.
Like Wrath,
when it all just crumbles down.
Like Sloth,
where it just can't go on.
And one thing leads to another--
leaving me with this craving,
A craving for a certain something--
a certain...
sin.
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It's a dangerous thing,
this craving of mine.

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~allofmyconfusion Oct 7, 2009, 10:00:28 PM
AWESOME! :heart: love it

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~MakoUzumaki2461 Oct 8, 2009, 12:10:06 AM
ty :3

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Penguins ROCK! x]

I'm a girl with ADD and such a random mind it's not even funny. Give me some magic markers, sharpies, pens, spray paint, 15 minutes, -and maybe some penguins- and you wouldn't believe how colorful the world could be..>=]
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*NuriZahra Oct 6, 2009, 9:00:52 PM
amazingly beautiful. :+fav:

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~MakoUzumaki2461 Oct 6, 2009, 9:15:29 PM
Aw, thanks! Hay, for a prize of being the first to comment, I'll write a poem just for you--that is, if you'd like.

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Penguins ROCK! x]

I'm a girl with ADD and such a random mind it's not even funny. Give me some magic markers, sharpies, pens, spray paint, 15 minutes, -and maybe some penguins- and you wouldn't believe how colorful the world could be..>=]
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*NuriZahra Oct 6, 2009, 9:17:47 PM
absolutely.

I used to write myself, but my muse left me high and dry. So now I read the good stuff instead of trying to make it. ^_^

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~MakoUzumaki2461 Oct 6, 2009, 9:22:41 PM
haha droughts never last long--or rather, sometimes they do, but what I'm trying to say is they end eventually >.>

Would you give me a title or topic? or possibly your name or something?

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Penguins ROCK! x]

I'm a girl with ADD and such a random mind it's not even funny. Give me some magic markers, sharpies, pens, spray paint, 15 minutes, -and maybe some penguins- and you wouldn't believe how colorful the world could be..>=]
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*NuriZahra Oct 6, 2009, 9:35:57 PM
Nah, my inspirational drought will be life-long. My husband left, he was my muse. I've never been artistic without him. He's gone so my art is too. It's been 2 months and 1 week, so I'm used to it by now, no worries.

My name is Jennifer, but I go by Ashe. Read these and I'm sure you'll find a topic of some sort, lol. They're some of my old works.

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~MakoUzumaki2461 Oct 6, 2009, 10:03:46 PM
[link]

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Penguins ROCK! x]

I'm a girl with ADD and such a random mind it's not even funny. Give me some magic markers, sharpies, pens, spray paint, 15 minutes, -and maybe some penguins- and you wouldn't believe how colorful the world could be..>=]
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*NuriZahra Oct 6, 2009, 10:08:25 PM
thank you for this. thank you very much. I know it may seem silly, but this means a great deal to me. thank you.

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~MakoUzumaki2461 Oct 6, 2009, 10:31:09 PM
it's no problem...it kind of makes me feel embarrassed if you praise it so much..

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Penguins ROCK! x]

I'm a girl with ADD and such a random mind it's not even funny. Give me some magic markers, sharpies, pens, spray paint, 15 minutes, -and maybe some penguins- and you wouldn't believe how colorful the world could be..>=]
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