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Like a crystal in the light,
i lose myself.
dull within the wooden box,
it loses its light as dust surrounds its smooth figure.
i remember the times i had with you,
the times that made you and i shine the most.
we laughed.
we cried.
we played together.
and those memories are reflected...
upon the sides of this crystal.
the crystal of our memories.
the crystal of my heart.
broken.
within this wooden box,
at the back of my closet...
collecting dust as i cry myself to sleep.
yeah im pretty excited! this is my first ever commission mahn.

i feel happy! i hope she's okay with this. i had this image of this crystal pendant shattering into pieces on clear glass floor. of course memories of the deceased (which i couldnt really make out) were reflected and broken. its a bit sad. but i hope its still okay.
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Saridim Oct 27, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Uwaahhh <33 i'll cherish this poem for ever <3
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Saridim Oct 27, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
*gives you magic markers,sharpies,pens,spray paint, time, and penguins*
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Saridim Oct 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my the world shall be VERY much more colorful
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:iconmakouzumaki2461:
lmaooo

if u look on my wall in my room, you'd def. think the world would be much better if i were its designer xD
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Saridim Nov 3, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol <3
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:iconmakouzumaki2461:
x3

...>.>

x4

HOMG! its a FOUR o.o

(NOT a three xP)
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:icongaararox777:
woah i like this
its very sad...
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:iconmakouzumaki2461:
xD

yay!!! she liked it! yay!!

my work here is done ;D
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